.:Panty and Stocking:.

Please do not think I am being a total bitch, I am only critiquing your work like you requested.

Stocking:
Stocking's wig looks great, well brushed and detangled from what I can see. The kitty and the candy are also VERY nice touches to the cosplay and great props. I would have liked to see more of your dress because it appears to be well made. Stocking, your makeup is also very nice for capturing that "innocent" look that stocking has. The only thing I see obviously off (since I can not see the front of your costume) is the color of your stockings. I believe that Stocking's socks have larger and wider stripes. Also, I cannot see your shoes.

Panty:
Panty's wig, on the other hand, is styled kind of awkwardly. The tips are not flipped out enough for my tastes and the bangs have almost no definition. Panty's bangs should swoop one way and be very angular. Consequently due to the cosplay, the dress is accurate but appears to be of a lesser quality. I believe this is due to the cosplay because all Panty wears is a simple red dress. The panties you are holding are an awkward color in contrast to your dress. The colors blend in and leave a weird optical illusion of the garment blending in with her dress. I also cannot see your shoes, but I do like your attention to details like nail color, bangles, and I assume earrings (I cannot see them).

Photographer:
Nice angle, but I would have liked to see a full body shot so that I could see the shoes... I like shoes. The background/landscape behind the girls is also kind of bland and boring. Maybe something a bit more fun or outdoors?

Editor:
I don't know what filter you put on this but it kind of distorted the colors a bit. Maybe try a different filter or way to edit this to make it have more blue tints to it? I'm not a professional photo editor, and I don't know your vision. Even though I don't know your vision I should be able to translate it for myself and I just am missing the mark....

Vision: 3 Stars
I can see what you were trying to pull across and you hit the target, but not the bulls eye.

Originality: 1.5 Stars
.... There are so many P&SWGB cosplayers I had to rate this kind of low. Plus, these are the "regular" outfits instead of something more complicated like the "angel" outfits.

Technique: 4 Stars
I can tell you put in your best effort for this. Your wigs were even brushed which counts for at least 2 stars. The cosplay's look like they aren't exactly cheap either.

Impact: 2 Stars
Just didn't have the "wow factor" for me.

Conclusion:
You girls are beautiful. Keep cosplaying and evolving your techniques and quality of your photos and cosplay. There is always room for improvement. Keep cosplaying and I hope to see many more pictures.

- Apple Davies
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